writing talk
Feb. 19th, 2003 11:53 amLoved Cassie's "Written," and wholly disagree w/ those who thought she should have been more explicit about her characters' motivations. The mark of a good writer is in being able to tell your story the way it needs to be told, and when necessary, trusting the reader to be smart enough to appreciate scenarios that allow for intrepretation -- to show, not tell. More details in the story would have done it injustice. (I once wrote a post-colonization story in which Mulder contemplated suicide; I didn't take the advice of my beta reader and wrote in a particular way he could have done it. In retrospect, I should have listened to my beta: It would have been much more compelling if I'd left it up to the reader to imagine all the different ways Mulder might have gone about it.)
Also read a few stories recently that I thoroughly enjoyed, over at Restricted Section -- a D/G series by MsScribe. I love the "feel" of them. The first is "The Fairy Hunter," followed by "Eyes Wide Open," and finally, "After the Dance." Dare I hope that she'll continue? I wish they'd tell us the date something posted ... I haven't searched there in awhile and don't know when these were submitted. Might give me a better idea of whether she plans to continue or not.
I've instituted a writing rule myself: One page a day. I tend to write, when I'm inspired, in large chunks. I hate writing a bit, then going back to the part and be unable to get back into the same "voice" as before, or forget exactly where I was going. But these days, if I don't force myself to write, I never feel like writing. I think about it a lot, but never actually do it. This way, one page may encourage more, and even if it's crap it's often easier for me to edit my work than it is to form it from scratch. And at the end of a year's time, say, at least I'll know I'll have 365 pages of something. <g> I wasn't going to post this story as a WIP, but it's so damn long that I don't see any way around it. I've loved to be able to finish it first, as I'm not the best writer of WIPs, but I just don't think that's going to happen. Alas.
Also read a few stories recently that I thoroughly enjoyed, over at Restricted Section -- a D/G series by MsScribe. I love the "feel" of them. The first is "The Fairy Hunter," followed by "Eyes Wide Open," and finally, "After the Dance." Dare I hope that she'll continue? I wish they'd tell us the date something posted ... I haven't searched there in awhile and don't know when these were submitted. Might give me a better idea of whether she plans to continue or not.
I've instituted a writing rule myself: One page a day. I tend to write, when I'm inspired, in large chunks. I hate writing a bit, then going back to the part and be unable to get back into the same "voice" as before, or forget exactly where I was going. But these days, if I don't force myself to write, I never feel like writing. I think about it a lot, but never actually do it. This way, one page may encourage more, and even if it's crap it's often easier for me to edit my work than it is to form it from scratch. And at the end of a year's time, say, at least I'll know I'll have 365 pages of something. <g> I wasn't going to post this story as a WIP, but it's so damn long that I don't see any way around it. I've loved to be able to finish it first, as I'm not the best writer of WIPs, but I just don't think that's going to happen. Alas.
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Date: 2003-03-01 09:57 pm (UTC)Sincerely,
VioletJersey (violetjersey@yahoo.com)
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Date: 2003-03-03 11:46 am (UTC)there's already 7 chapters in MsScribe's fic
Heehee, yes, I recently discovered that, and was a total fangirl about it. So exciting!
I noticed that Ezra's ancestry is from the Philippines... and I was wondering if you guys are Filipinos?
Hmmm ... well I hate to change your mind about us (we like fans <g>), but we aren't Filipino, and I don't believe Ezra was said to be from the Philippines, either. :( IIRC, she's from Hawaii. However, one of my favorite female vocalists of all time is Filipino, does that count? <g> Lea Salonga -- I just bought a shitload of CDs off eBay of her live performances in the Philippines that you can't get here.
Sarea
Oops... sorry!
Date: 2003-03-12 11:31 am (UTC)As for Lea Salonga... she is so awesome! Her voice is beyond words! Actually, we happen to have alot of great singers! My faves are Regine Velasquez (she's like uber-popular here!) & Nina (she's like our version of Mariah Carey but w/o the slutty wardrobe... and sings a whole lot better!)...
oh yeah... when are the two of you going to write again... and would it be okay to add you to my Friends list in LJ... pls? *smiles shyly*
Re: Oops... sorry!
Date: 2003-03-12 11:59 am (UTC)You are so right, of course. I can't believe I didn't remember that -- actually, I can believe it because I was probably impatiently waiting for Draco to appear again -- but more importantly, I can't believe that Jade didn't remember that. Just goes to show, huh, that when you're writing a long story you can even slip up on details that you made up yourself? Anyway, I'm way embarrassed and I bet Jade is too. Shame on us, and good for you! <g>
Regine Velasquez (she's like uber-popular here!) & Nina
Oooh, I will check them out. I primarily know Lea from her Broadway work, of course, and yes -- her voice is absolutely amazing.
when are the two of you going to write again
Oh, we're constantly writing -- the question is, when will we ever finish something to post. ; ) But even there, I'm getting closer ... As for Jade, she wrote some follow-up vignettes to "Our Winter" that was list-only for a time, but I think it's now available on her LJ -- if you haven't already read them, go there now! : ) (Her journal:
would it be okay to add you to my Friends list in LJ
Absolutely! I'll add you now.
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Date: 2003-03-03 03:00 pm (UTC)-Loveisnowhere
Re: blurp
Date: 2003-03-03 07:15 pm (UTC)Sarea